10 Golden tips for writers

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There are plenty of folks happy to tell you how to write better, just as any doctor will tell you to “eat right and exercise.” But changing your writing (or eating) habits only happens when you understand why you do what you do. I can help you with that.

That proposal or email you wrote must now compete for attention with Facebook and the Huffington Post. Here’s how to compete more effectively, and why you’re not doing it already.

1 Write shorter.

Why it matters. Readers are impatient and will give up on your blog post, email, or document before you’ve made your point. Every extra word makes readers antsy.

Why you write long. It’s far easier to type than to edit. So people just keep adding things.

How to fix it. Edit. Delete your “warming up” text and start with the main point. Cull extraneous detail and repetition. Work…

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How To Get A Date

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Hey guys, sorry I haven’t been posting much lately; I’ve been spending my free time making this video!  Below is a link to  my submission for the Doritos 2016 Crash The Superbowl Contest.

Watch The Video Here – Be sure to watch in 1080 HD

 Doritos helps you meet girls! Who would have thought? 

Please comment, share and let me know what you think!

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Why I hate Grocery Stores, Children, and Old People

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Yesterday, my wife convinced me to go to the local grocery store to purchase ingredients for dinner. Normally, I don’t mind making a quick stop at the grocery store because I’m fairly familiar with the store layout and I’m in and out in a few minutes. Well, on a normal day, I would have been in and out. Yesterday, it was POURING down rain (I know that is a major surprise in Seattle), the store was unusually crowded on a Saturday afternoon, people were parking like dumbasses, and I was in a (slight) hurry. All of these factors mean that my trip would be doomed from the start.

Please note, I’m middle age myself and I go with the flow. Some might call me old. I don’t get upset with traffic; I just accept it. I know that it does no good to rush around the store just to gain…

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To My Little Brother on 22nd His Birthday!

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Okay, so I don’t usually do posts like this since it is a Beauty, Fashion, and Recipe/DIY blog but it’s my brothers birthday and I can’t help myself so here it is.

22 years old! Wow…congratulations, my deaphoto (14)r sweet baby brother. Happy 22nd birthday! I wish I could be there to see you but you know life’s circumstances keep us miles apart right now. I’ll be there for your next one, I promise. I miss you every single day and to say that I love you to the moon and back does not even describe how much I love you.

photo (3)I seriously can’t believe that you’re 22 years old today! It seems like just yesterday you dropped your ice cream on the ground and started crying – and my big sister insticts kicked in and I gave you mine because I never, ever wanted to see you shed…

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